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2012-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I couldn’t attend our class because of urget meeting with our client. So I would like to study by reviewing lecture we did yesterday. Of our dialogue yesterday, I tried to remind some expression talking to you and wrote as below.Please check the below script. Today it would be grateful if we are talking about TOEIC.In Korea, many students looking for a job study toeic because it is necessary to get their jobs. Especially, in case the company which business with foreigners, high score will be needed absolutely.Actually most shipping company such as our company require employee to get a toeic score of at least 800. I had toeic score of exactly 800 but it will be expired from end of this August because it’s validity period is 2 years. I cannot hep writing next bulletin board about the rest of expression because of limit of typing quantity.

강사 첨삭

Good day! I know that sometimes its really hard to manage our daily activities and schedules but do not stress yourself too much. Take it easy and always stay cool. Find time to take a break. By the way if you wanted to write a longer composition you can write an email at [이메일]. Just indicate my name in that email. Thanks=) ~T. Kelly~ I couldn’t attend our class because of urget meeting with our client. >>I didn\'t attend our class because of an urgent meeting with our client.So I would like to study by reviewing lecture we did yesterday. >>So, I am reviewing our lecture yesterday.Of our dialogue yesterday, I tried to remind some expression talking to you and wrote as below. >>With our dialogue yesterday, I\'m trying to recall some of the expressions and wrote them for you. Please check the below script. >>Please check the script below.Today it would be grateful if we are talking about TOEIC. >>I would be grateful if we will talk about TOEIC. In Korea, many students looking for a job study toeic because it is necessary to get their jobs. >>In Korea, many students are looking for a way to study TOEIC because it is necessary when applying for a job. Especially, in case the company which business with foreigners, high score will be needed absolutely. >>Especially if the company deals business with foreigners, having a high score is absolutely needed. Actually most shipping company such as our company require employee to get a toeic score of at least 800. >>Actually, most of the shipping companies like ours, require employees that has a TOEIC score of at least 800. I had toeic score of exactly 800 but it will be expired from end of this August because it’s validity period is 2 years.>>I have a TOEIC score of exactly 800 but it will expire by the end of August because the validity period is good for 2 years.I cannot hep writing next bulletin board about the rest of expression because of limit of typing quantity. >>I can\'t help on writing about the rest of the expressions but the space is very limited.

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