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2012-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Finally, the world festival olympic was thoroughly finishined. Korea purpose is to get 20 medal, that is 10 gold medals and silver medals each other. Finally, we can achieve our purpose by getting 13 gold medals and 8 silver medals. So we ranked 5 following America, China, England, Russia. Before starting today’s lecture, I would like to raise my questions. During our lecture the day before yesterday, I didn’t have a pen so I couldn’t write down a word’s spelling of “coo ~~ something like that” Did you remember this word? Now I’m ready to write down the spell of the word. Could you tell me again about this word? Anyway, It started new week again. Fortunatelly, we have holiday in Wed. this week. The day is independence day. Korean celebrates their independence from Japanese colonial rule annually on Aug. 15th. It means the nation’s freedom and liberation as a country. It is an official national holiday so most shops and company are closed.

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Hello [이름]! I have to congratulate all your talented and hardworking athletes for a job well done. ^^ Now regarding the word you were asking, let me listen to our class again on that day so that I can recall what it was. I\'ll let you know immediately about it on our next class. :) T. Kelly Finally, the world festival olympic was thoroughly finishined. >>Finally, the Olympics is finished.Korea purpose is to get 20 medal, that is 10 gold medals and silver medals each other. >>Korea\'s goal was to get 20 medals, that is, 10 gold medals and silver medals.  Finally, we can achieve our purpose by getting 13 gold medals and 8 silver medals. >>We were able to achieve our goal by getting 13 gold medals and 8 silver medals. So we ranked 5 following America, China, England, Russia.>>Correct!Before starting today’s lecture, I would like to raise my questions. >>Correct! >>Before starting today\'s lecture, I would like to raise some questions.During our lecture the day before yesterday, I didn’t have a pen so I couldn’t write down a word’s spelling of “coo ~~ something like that”>>During our lecture the day before yesterday, I didn\'t have a ped so I wasn\'t able to write down a word. Coo... something like that. Did you remember this word? >>Do you remember this word? Now I’m ready to write down the spell of the word. >>I\'m ready now to write down the spelling of the word. Could you tell me again about this word?>>Could you tell me what this word is again?Anyway, It started new week again. >>Anyway, a new week started again.  Fortunatelly, we have holiday in Wed. this week. >>Fortunately, we have a holiday this Wednesday.The day is independence day. >>Correct! >>It is our independence day on that day.Korean celebrates their independence from Japanese colonial rule annually on Aug. 15th. >>Koreans celebrate their independence from Japanese colonial rule annually on Aug. 15th.It means the nation’s freedom and liberation as a country. >>Correct!It is an official national holiday so most shops and company are closed. >>It is an official national holiday so most shops and companies will be closed.  

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