REVIEW
학생이 쓴 원문
p.6
1. What do you always hear people talk about?
Nowdays, People talk about covid-19 all the time. But before pandamic, they talked about political issues.
2. What good and bad things about you have you heard form others.
When I join my company, people talk about my \'loud greeting\' Some said, it is very polite and cheerful. but others don\'t like it. I guess they thougt it is cheesy. In other words, They regarded me as a plastic!
1. How do you know what\'s happening around you?
I usually hear the news online.
2. What\'s wrong with believeing everything you\'re hearing?
I believed Santa Clause gives me present on Christmas. Because my parents and teachers told me that. But there is no Santa Clause and the presents were from my parents.
3. What would you do if you heard something highly confidential?
It depends on the situation. But If it is life-threating, I will report it to police. (It is a difficult problem because it could be dangerous.)
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! ^^,)
This composition is like a recap of the things we discussed last time.
I hope that you will continue to improve your English communication skills.
With constant practice, you will surely achieve your goal of becoming a fluent speaker.
See you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
1. What do you always hear people talk about?
Nowdays, People talk about covid-19 all the time. But before pandamic, they talked about political issues.
>>> Nowadays, people talk about Covid-19 all the time, but before pandemic, they talked about political issues.
Nowdays, People talk about covid-19 all the time. But before pandamic, they talked about political issues.
>>> Nowadays, people talk about Covid-19 all the time, but before pandemic, they talked about political issues.
2. What good and bad things about you have you heard form others.
When I join my company, people talk about my \'loud greeting\' Some said, it is very polite and cheerful. but others don\'t like it. I guess they thougt it is cheesy. In other words, They regarded me as a plastic!
>>> When I joined my company, people talked about my \'loud greeting\'. Some said that it was very polite and cheerful, but others didn\'t like it. I guess they thought it\'s cheesy. In other words, they regarded me as a plastic person!
1. How do you know what\'s happening around you?
I usually hear the news online.
>>> CORRECT
2. What\'s wrong with believeing everything you\'re hearing?
I believed Santa Clause gives me present on Christmas. Because my parents and teachers told me that. But there is no Santa Clause and the presents were from my parents.
>>> I believed that Santa Claus gave me presents on Christmas Day when I was a child because my parents and teachers told me so. However, there is no Santa Claus and the presents were from my parents.
3. What would you do if you heard something highly confidential?
It depends on the situation. But If it is life-threating, I will report it to police. (It is a difficult problem because it could be dangerous.)
>>> It depends on the situation, but if it is life-threating then I will report it to the police. (It is a difficult decision/choice to make because it could be dangerous.)
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