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Dear, Teacher Cam Always I listened carefully to your teaching. Actually I have never heard chores word. So, It is difficult. I will show you my trying. My homework) 1) The building was blew up by an accident. 2) After air conditioner broke down, the class room is like a steambath. 3) There was not people in mall. My business was in trouble. So, I have a mind . I call my business off in mall. 4) I am going to dress up blind date. 5) Go a head. I want to hear your song.

Hi there! Thank you for your composition today! I appreciate your effort in answering your homework. You did a great job despite some errors on your grammar! Take care and have a great time! xoxoT. Cam Dear, Teacher Cam>>Dear teacher Cam,Always I listened carefully to your teaching.>>I always listen carefully to your teaching.Actually I have never heard chores word.>>Actually, I have never heard the word \'chores\'.So, It is difficult. >>So it is difficult.I will show you my trying.>>I will try to understand it more. >>I will give more effort in class.My homework)>>My homework:1) The building was blew up by an accident.>>The building blew up by accident.2) After air conditioner broke down, the class room is like a steambath.>>After the air conditioner broke down, the class room was like a steam bath.3) There was not people in mall. My business was in trouble. >>There were no people in the mall. My business was in trouble. So, I have a mind . I call my business off in mall.>>So I decided to call my business off.4) I am going to dress up blind date.>>I am going to dress up for my blind date.5) Go a head. I want to hear your song. >>Go ahead. I want to hear you song. (Just be careful with your spacing.)