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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly,
Let's review our dialogue today.
Thanks for your prompt reply for my question on bulletin board yesterday.
You're a certainly nice teacher, not to mention kind.
Today I will talking to you about korea sauna. Are you ready?
If you’re up to feeling refreshing and relaxting, head over to sauna. This is called “JJimjilbang” in Korea.
Korea sauna don’t cost very much and there are everywhere.
Most local sauna have steam room and hot/cold pool. And larger sauna offer so much more.
High-end sauna have massage room and skin and nail shop. Most of all, there is woman’s favorite,
the scrub massage, where a specialist scrub you from top to bottom and exfoliates your skin.
If you will visit to Korea someday, and plan to enjoy Korea sauna, don’t forget to drink Korea traditional drink.
This is called “Sikhae”, which is made from rice. It’s delicious and cold.
I hope you register cell phone well this weekend.
Have your nice day!
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Thank you for your composition today. I enjoy checking your work because it shows that you\'re eager to improve your english skills. Keep it up! Anyway, enjoy your Friday and have a wonderful weekend! Take care, [이름]!
__Kelly__
Hi Kelly,>> Correct!Let\'s review our dialogue today.>> Correct!Thanks for your prompt reply for my question on bulletin board yesterday. >> Thanks for your prompt reply regarding my questions on the bulletin board yesterday. You\'re a certainly nice teacher, not to mention kind.>> You\'re certainly a nice teacher, not to mention kind.(***Thanks [이름] for these nice words)Today I will talking to you about korea sauna.
>> Today, I will talk about Korea\'s sauna.
Are you ready?
>> Correct!If you’re up to feeling refreshing and relaxting, head over to sauna.
>> If you want to relax and feel refreshed, head over to a sauna.
This is called “JJimjilbang” in Korea.>> Correct!
>> This is called \"Jimjilbang\" in Korea.
Korea sauna don’t cost very much and there are everywhere. >> Korea\'s sauna doesn\'t cost very much and it is seen everywhere.
Most local sauna have steam room and hot/cold pool.
>> Most local saunas have steam rooms and hot/cold pools.
And larger sauna offer so much more. >> A larger sauna offers so much more.
High-end sauna have massage room and skin and nail shop.
>> A high-end sauna has a massage room as well as skin and nail shop.
Most of all, there is woman’s favorite,
>>These are women\'s favorite. the scrub massage, where a specialist scrub you from top to bottom and exfoliates your skin.
>>A specialist scrubs you from top to bottom to exfoliate your skin.If you will visit to Korea someday, and plan to enjoy Korea sauna, don’t forget to drink Korea traditional drink.
>> If you will visit Korea someday to enjoy the sauna, don\'t forget to try Korea\'s traditional drink.This is called “Sikhae”, which is made from rice.
>> This is called \"Sikhae\" and it is made from rice.
It\' s delicious and cold.>> Correct!I hope you register cell phone well this weekend.>> I hope you register your cell phone well this weekend. (Thank you again [이름]!)Have your nice day!
>> Have a nice day!
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