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학생이 쓴 원문
Did you have lunch? It will be grateful if you check our dialogue.
During this weekend, I went to Jeju, where is a southernmost island of Korea.
The reason I went to is to meet my x-grilfriend.
Actually, I said a goodbye to her because our parents reject to our marriage.
But, Certainely, we had a good relaitonship with her for 3 years. The fact made us that
we couldn’t forget a good memory each other after separations for 4 months.
So, we were happy to meet again after a long separation.
And I knew the fact that nothing is harder than to say good-bye to someone I love.
From now on, I’ll try to do my best to keep our love again.
Actually, I went through a hard time feeling the sorrow of parting for past 4 months.
So did more study, work and exercise more than usual to forget this sorrow.
English study via cell phone is also likely to be started because of the same this reason.
Have you ever experienced to rejoin with your x-boy friend such as my case?
Bye!
강사 첨삭
Wow! My heart is deeply touched with your story. I really wonder if your parents will eventually realize your love for each other and allow the two of you to get married. It sounds like a love story from a Korean drama.^^ Well about my love story, I would rather talk about it in class kkkk. Though, I have to say, I\'m really inspired with what you had to go through. I could say that you really are strong. Always remember, if you love each other, then you will find a way to be together.
T. Kelly
Did you have lunch?
>>Correct!
It will be grateful if you check our dialogue.>>I would be grateful if you would check our dialogue.During this weekend, I went to Jeju, where is a southernmost island of Korea.
>>Last weekend, I went to Jeju which is in the southernmost island of Korea.The reason I went to is to meet my x-grilfriend.
>>The reason I went there is to meet my ex-girlfriend.Actually, I said a goodbye to her because our parents reject to our marriage.
>>Actually, I said goodbye to her because our parents refused our marriage.
>>Actually, we broke up since our parents were against our marriage.But, Certainely, we had a good relaitonship with her for 3 years.
>>But we had a really good relationship for 3 years.
>>But we definitely had a good relationship for 3 years.
The fact made us that we couldn’t forget a good memory each other after separations for 4 months.>>We couldn\'t forget each other after being separated for 4 months.So, we were happy to meet again after a long separation.
>>Correct!
And I knew the fact that nothing is harder than to say good-bye to someone I love.
>>Correct!From now on, I’ll try to do my best to keep our love again.>>From now on, I\'ll try to do my best to renew our love.
>>From now on, I\'ll try to keep our love for each other.Actually, I went through a hard time feeling the sorrow of parting for past 4 months.
>>Actually, I was depressed after we parted for 4 months.So did more study, work and exercise more than usual to forget this sorrow.
>>So I studied, worked, and exercised more than usual to forget this sorrow.English study via cell phone is also likely to be started because of the same this reason.>>I started studying English by phone because of the same reason.Have you ever experienced to rejoin with your x-boy friend such as my case?>>Have you ever experienced meeting with your ex-boyfriend like in my case?Bye!
>>Correct!
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