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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
It seems that you are now probably having lunch.
I'm writting here hoping that you have a great lunch now.
During this weekend, I went to gingko tree street to take pictures.
Gingko tree street was adorned with gingko tree both sides of streets.
So many people love visting here. But this beautiful scenery is not the only reason why many people visit here. This place was filled with cozy restaurants, cafes, bars, accessory shops and what have you. So many people refer to this street as “Europe in seoul". Actually, it’s an ideal place to take picures like me.
Photography is my favorite hobby. I’m not a professional photographer but I have grown to love it. Taking a picture is a great way to capture memories at the moment.
Actually, when I got along well with x-grilfriend 3 years ago, we took pictures so we have no problem even when we have quarreleed seriously.
Also, I hope this moment talking with you will be valuable memory in our life.
Enjoy the rest of day!
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
I am so glad you are putting your thoughts into writting. Keep it up! There are moments I wish too I did things earlier. You could really express yourself well. I like how you organize your sentences to express yourself. Keep communicating in English!
Teacher Kelly
Hi.
>>CorrectIt seems that you are now probably having lunch.
>>CorrectI\'m writting here hoping that you have a great lunch now. >>CorrectDuring this weekend, I went to gingko tree street to take pictures.>>Correct
Gingko tree street was adorned with gingko tree both sides of streets.>>Gingko tree street was adorned because of gingko tree on both sides of streets.
So many people love visiting here.
>>Correct
But this beautiful scenery is not the only reason why many people visit here.
>>Correct
This place was filled with cozy restaurants, cafes, bars, accessory shops and what have you.
>> This place was filled with cozy restaurants, cafes, bars, accessory shops and must have items.
So many people refer to this street as “Europe in Seoul\".
>>Correct
Actually, it’s an ideal place to take picures like me.>> Actually, it’s an ideal place to take picures like what I do.Photography is my favorite hobby.
>>Correct
I’m not a professional photographer but I have grown to love it.
>>Correct
Taking a picture is a great way to capture memories at the moment.>>Correct
Actually, when I got along well with x-grilfriend 3 years ago, we took pictures so we have no problem even when we have quarreleed seriously.
>>Actually, when I got along well with my x girlfriend 3 years ago, we took pictures so we have no problem even when we have seriously quarreled. Also, I hope this moment talking with you will be valuable memory in our life.
>>Also, I hope this moment, talking with you will be a valuable memory in our lives.Enjoy the rest of day!
>>Correct
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