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2012-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good morning! Throughout yesterday morning, not only was I very busy but also there was a meeting at 1130am. So I was afraid of the fact that I had no choice but to skip our lecture. Most people dread going to the dentist. But we all neet to get a check-up once in a while.This is why we make sure our teeth are in good condition. How to get a check-up is very easy than you expected.First, when you arrive at the dentist’s office, the receptionist greets you and confirm your appointment. Then you will take a seat and be waiting for your turns in the waiting room. Your name will be called out when it’s your turn. Finally, when it’s your turn, the dentist starts to examine your mouth. If you’re lucky, you won’t have any cavities or problem. On the other hands, If you have any problem in your mouth, you are able to be treated during that time at the same time. Most of all, the best way to avoid extra fees about teeth is taking care of your teeth regulary.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for the summary of our lesson last Friday. I\'m so proud of you because you\'ve improved a lot on you grammar. I\'m really happy for you. Anyway, see you later. ~~KeLLy~~ Good morning!>>Correct! (Good morning [이름]!)Throughout yesterday morning, not only was I very busy but also there was a meeting at 11:30am. >>Correct! So I was afraid of the fact that I had no choice but to skip our lecture. >>Correct! Most people dread going to the dentist. >>Correct! But we all need to get a check-up once in a while. >>Correct! This is why we make sure our teeth are in good condition. >>Correct! How to get a check-up is very easy than you expected. >> Going for a check-up is easier than what we thought. First, when you arrive at the dentist’s office, the receptionist greets you and confirm your appointment. >>Correct! Then you will take a seat and be waiting for your turns in the waiting room. >>Then you will take a seat and be waiting for your turn in the waiting room. Your name will be called out when it’s your turn. >>Correct! Finally, when it’s your turn, the dentist starts to examine your mouth. >>Correct!  >> Finally, when it\'s your turn, the dentist starts to examine your teeth. If you’re lucky, you won’t have any cavities or problem. >> >>Correct! On the other hands, If you have any problem in your mouth, you are able to be treated during that time at the same time. >> On the other hand, If you have a problem in your mouth, you will be treated right away. Most of all, the best way to avoid extra fees about teeth is taking care of your teeth regulary. >> The best way to avoid extra fees is to take care of your teeth regularly.

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