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2012-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Good afternoon! I reminded the word you talked to me through reviewing voice record we did last week. The word is compatibility. I knew that this word is almost similar to the word of harmony. So I made one sentence by using this word like “Please check your computer for compatibility with New software” Further more, I found that adjective of compatibility is compatible. The dictionary says that if things such as systems, ideas and beliefs are compatible, they work well together or can exist together successfully. Anyway, I’m glad to know new word. As you know, I go to semina every Friday afternoon. This semina is consist of the lecture about marine insurance and it is scheduled to do until the beginning of sep. The last program of this semina is to go to china for four days and three nights. We are afraid the fact we go to there with my co-worker not with my girlfriend, but the fact going to china is very interesting to me. Especially, the fact everything is for free is amazing.

강사 첨삭

I\'m happy to know that you learned something new in class. I\'d be more than happy to help you learn more vocabularies and expressions that can aid you more in improving your speaking skills. Talk to you soon! T. Kelly Good afternoon! >>Correct!I reminded the word you talked to me through reviewing voice record we did last week. >>I recalled the word you told me by listening to the voice recording we did last week.The word is compatibility. >>Correct!  I knew that this word is almost similar to the word of harmony. >>I know that this word is almost similar to the word harmony. So I made one sentence by using this word like “Please check your computer for compatibility with New software” >>So I made one sentence by using the word and here\'s the sentence: \"Please check your computer for the compatibility with the new software.\" Further more, I found that adjective of compatibility is compatible. >>Furthermore, I found that the adjective The dictionary says that if things such as systems, ideas and beliefs are compatible, they work well together or can exist together successfully. >>Correct! Anyway, I’m glad to know new word. >>Anyway, I\'m glad to know a new word. As you know, I go to semina every Friday afternoon. >>As you know, I go to a seminar every Friday afternoon. This semina is consist of the lecture about marine insurance and it is scheduled to do until the beginning of sep. >>These seminars consist of a lecture about marine insurance and it is scheduled to be discussed until the beginning of September. The last program of this semina is to go to china for four days and three nights. >>The last program of this seminar is to go to China for four days and three nights. We are afraid the fact we go to there with my co-worker not with my girlfriend, but the fact going to china is very interesting to me. >>I am afraid of going there with my co-worker and not with my girlfriend but the idea of going to China is very interesting to me.  Especially, the fact everything is for free is amazing. >>Especially because everything will be paid for by our company. >>Especially  because it\'s an all expense paid trip.

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