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2012-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good afternoon! Did you have lunch? I look forward to hearing your reply for below. The day before yesterday, I attended dinner party held by our company. At there, I had a great time with co-workers but I drank too much alcohol until late at night. So I cannot choice but to take taxi from there to my home. I was afraid that too much taxi charges occurred as I expected. Unfortunatelly, to make matters worse, aftereffect of that day had a strong influence on spending time throughout yesterday. Unusually, Most Korean think those who love drinking alchol are also good at working their work. As welll as working well, they think loving alcohol is essential factor for being nice or cool or smart guy. Just loving alcohol don’t mean drinking too much. What is important is not dring too much but just loving drinking alcohol. In my case, I can’t drink too much but I never felt any difficulties in getting along because I like exciting atmosphere by drinking alcohol.

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Do you mean to say that loving alcohol is not the same as drinking alcohol? Well, I guess in a way that\'s possible. Just like you, I don\'t always drink alcohol either but I do enjoy the feeling of drinking with my friends and forgetting about my problems. I guess we could discuss more about this in class. ^^ T. Kelly Good afternoon! Did you have lunch? >>Correct!I look forward to hearing your reply for below.>>I look forward to hearing your reply about the topic below.The day before yesterday, I attended dinner party held by our company. >>I attended a dinner party held by our company a day before yesterday.At there, I had a great time with co-workers but I drank too much alcohol until late at night.>>I had a great time there with my co-workers but I drank too much alcohol until late at night.So I cannot choice but to take taxi from there to my home. >>So I had no choice but to take a taxi from that place to my home.I was afraid that too much taxi charges occurred as I expected.>>I was afraid that I will have to pay a lot for my taxi fare.Unfortunatelly, to make matters worse, aftereffect of that day had a strong influence on spending time throughout yesterday. >>To make the matters worse, the aftereffect of that day had a strong influence on how I spent my time yesterday.Unusually, Most Korean think those who love drinking alchol are also good at working their work. >>Unusually, most Koreans think those who love drinking alcohol are also good at working.As welll as working well, they think loving alcohol is essential factor for being nice or cool or smart guy.>>Aside from that, they think that loving alcohol is an essential factor for being nice, cool or a smart guy.Just loving alcohol don’t mean drinking too much. >>Loving alcohol doesn\'t mean drinking too much of it.What is important is not dring too much but just loving drinking alcohol. >>What is important is not to drink too much but to just love drinking alcohol.In my case, I can’t drink too much but I never felt any difficulties in getting along because I like exciting atmosphere by drinking alcohol. >>In my case, I can\'t drink too much but I\'ve never had any difficulties in getting along with other people because I like exciting atmospheres brought about by drinking alcohol.

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