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Good afternoon! Here is our dialogue today. Through today's lecture, I felt that I have to study english harder. There are exam on the 3rd Sunday Sep as the final of semina. If passing the exam, I get a cert of the expert in Marine insurance. But Unless passing the exam, I have to register this semina again for 3 months. It’s terrible to imagine that I register again because this semina are held every Friday. Friday is exciting day especially to salary man like me. Anyway, in this reason I have to study hard until passing the exam scheduled on sep. After getting off the work, I was feel tired when arrive my home. So It’s difficult to study for an exam after taking additional time out of break time. This is the reason I study something like english or studing for a exam in my office during duty-time when I was not busy to work. But, to make matters worse, thesedays I was very busy in my office because of many claims so I never study something.

Hi! Thank you for sending me your composition. I enjoyed reading this. Great job you were able to express your thoughts well. Don\'t worry I am here to help you to study English. Great start for this week! Have a geat week ahead of you. Take Care. See you again. T.Kelly Here are my corrections for you: Good afternoon! >>CorrectHere is our dialogue today. >>Here is our dialogue for today.Through today\'s lecture, I felt that I have to study english harder. >>In our today\'s lecture, I ralized that I have to study English harder. There are exam on the 3rd Sunday Sep as the final of semina. >>There will be an exam on the 3rd Sunday of September as the final part of the seminar.If passing the exam, I get a cert of the expert in Marine insurance. >>If I will pass the exam, I will be able to get a certificate of expertee for Marine Insurance.But Unless passing the exam, I have to register this semina again for 3 months. >>If I will not pass the exam,I have to register again for the seminar for 3 months. OR >>If I will not be able to pass the exam,I have to register again for 3 months in this seminar.It’s terrible to imagine that I register again because this semina are held every Friday. >>It\'s terrible to imagine that I have to register again because the seminar is held every Friday.Friday is exciting day especially to salary man like me. >>Friday is an exciting day especially to a salary man like me. OR >>Friday is really exciting for the people who is working like me.Anyway, in this reason I have to study hard until passing the exam scheduled on sep.>>Anyway,I have to study hard for me to pass the exam that is scheduled in September.After getting off the work, I was feel tired when arrive my home. >>After getting off to work,I feel tired when I arrive home. OR >>After work, I feel really tired when I got home.So It’s difficult to study for an exam after taking additional time out of break time. >>It\'s difficult to study for an exam after having an additional time aside from break.This is the reason I study something like english or studing for a exam in my office during duty-time when I was not busy to work. >>This is the reason I study something like English or studying for an exam in my office during working hours when I am not busy at work. OR >This is the reason I study English or for the exam I will be taking on September at my office during my duty when I am not busy with my work. But, to make matters worse, thesedays I was very busy in my office because of many claims so I never study something. >>But the worst is,these days I was very busy in my office because there were a lot of claims so I was not able to study anything.