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Did you have lunch? I know you are spending a interesting time by having lunch now. Please let me know corrections for the below, today's dialogue. In Korea, there are many complimentary newspaper near the substation and bus-stop. So, Anyone who go to work every morning can easily get a newspaper. If the traffice was not heavy than I expected, I can get a chance to read the newspaper in the café before entering my office. By leaving home at seven o’clock, I always hope that I wish I could read the newspaper. Reading the newspaper is beneficial for everyone, young and old. Newspapers keep us in touch with current local and wolrd affairs. It keeps us informed and help us feel connected with the world around me. By reading that, I can keep up with what interests me personally. Especiall I was interested in sports section.

Hi there,

Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job! Please go over the corrections/suggestions I have made towards your sentences. These will help you construct better and more grammatically correct sentences which you can use from day to day. We can talk some more about this during our next class. Take care and talk to you soon!

Teacher Kelly

Did you have lunch?

>>Correct

I know you are spending a interesting time by having lunch now.

>>I know you are spending an interesting time by having lunch now.

Please let me know corrections for the below, today\'s dialogue.
>> Please let me know the corrections below  for today\'s dialogue.
In Korea, there are many complimentary newspaper near the substation and bus-stop.

>>Correct

So, Anyone who go to work every morning can easily get a newspaper.

>>So, anyone who goes to work every morning can easily get a newspaper.

 If the traffice was not heavy than I expected, I can get a chance to read the newspaper in the café before entering my office.

>>  If the traffic was not heavier than I expected, I can get a chance to read the newspaper in a cafe before entering my office.

By leaving home at seven o’clock, I always hope that I wish I could read the newspaper.

>> By leaving home at seven o\'clock, I always hope that I could read the newspaper.

Reading the newspaper is beneficial for everyone, young and old.

>>Correct

Newspapers keep us in touch with current local and world affairs.

>>Correct

It keeps us informed and help us feel connected with the world around us.

>>Correct

By reading that, I can keep up with what interests me personally.

>>Correct

Especiall I was interested in sports section.

>>I\'m specially interested in the sports section.