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Good day Kelly, Your correction for the below is greatly helpful for me. One typhoon called by No.15 BOLAVEN is coming to us from south of Japan. Korea goverment is now worring about the approach of this typhoon because this is the biggest of this year. Maximum wind speed of this typhoon is almost 50m/s. This figure means that personal house window can be broken by this typoon. According to the weather informations, we will be under effectiveness by this from tonight. Have a nice day and see you tomorrow.

Hello [이름]!Thank you for the composition you made. You make me so proud of your ability to express yourself into writing. You did a good job yet you have to be more careful of the word choices. Anyway, I\'d like you to be cautious all the time. Make yourself ready in case of emergency. I know that everything will be fine. Just take necessary precautious this time so everything would do well tonight when the typhoon comes. I\'ll see you later in class! We\'ll discuss more about this. Thank you and have a great day ahead! Take care! ^^~~ T. Kelly ~~ Good day Kelly, >> Correct! OR>> Good day Kelly! (Better punctuation mark) Your correction for the below is greatly helpful for me. >> Your correction on my composition below would greatly help me. >> Your correction below will be helpful for me. >> Your correction for my composition below is greatly helpful for me.One typhoon called by No.15 BOLAVEN is coming to us from south of Japan. >> One typhoon named No. 15 Bolaven is coming in our country from the south of Japan.Korea goverment is now worring about the approach of this typhoon because this is the biggest of this year. >> Korean government is now worrying about the coming typhoon because this is the strongest this year. Maximum wind speed of this typhoon is almost 50m/s. >> It has a wind speed of maximum of 50m/s. >> The maximum wind speed of this typhoon is almost 50m/s. This figure means that personal house window can be broken by this typoon. >> This figure means that the window of a house can be broken by this typhoon.According to the weather informations, we will be under effectiveness by this from tonight. >> According to the weather information, we will experience the typhoon starting tonight. >> According to the weather forecaster, the typhoon will come tonight.Have a nice day and see you tomorrow. >> Correct!