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Following the review(1), I wrote the rest of used expression dated 25th July below.
So I plan to study toeic but it ‘s not easy to study by working at the same time.
In this reason, I registered study group where we will study toeic twice a week for 2 hours.When I faced troublesome by studying toeic, may I ask you?
But I think asking you for troublesome such as difficult question is probably more difficult than solving myself.
Actually, are there someone studying toeic with you via cellphone?
If there are, how do they study it with you?
Oh! Our time is almost over.
Have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
How are you? I hope you had a great day^^ Thank you for your composition. Keep up the good work in expressing your feelings well.
I hope to see you^^ Take Care! Regarding your question, yes we do teach TOEIC here. We have TOEIC Speaking courses here at Power English. If you have any questions about this you can contact our Korean managers. I would be glad to help you out in this matter.
T.Kelly
Following the review(1), I wrote the rest of used expression dated 25th July below.>>This is the continuation of the review that I wrote about the expressions on the 25th of July.So I plan to study toeic but it ‘s not easy to study by working at the same time.
>>I\'m planning to study TOEIC but its not easy to study while working at the same time.In this reason, I registered study group where we will study toeic twice a week for 2 hours.
>>Because of this, I registered to a group who are studying TOEIC twice a week for 2 hours.
When I faced troublesome by studying toeic, may I ask you?
>>If I have trouble with my studies, would you help me?But I think asking you for troublesome such as difficult question is probably more difficult than solving myself.>>However, I think asking you a difficult question is probably harder than doing it by myself.Actually, are there someone studying toeic with you via cellphone?
>>May I ask if there are students studying TOEIC via cellphone with you?If there are, how do they study it with you?>>CORRECT
OR
>>If there are, how do you conduct the class?Oh! Our time is almost over.
>>CORRECTHave a nice day!
>>CORRECT
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