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In addions, there is an official presidential ceremony to commemorate the historic moment. As well as the president, all of government leaders and representatives come together to pay Respect to those who fought for independence. All citizens are encouraged to display the national flag. It is an especially poignant day for those who recollect the war. We feel national pride on this day that reminds us of the sacrifices our ancestors made. I have knew the fact that your country were also under the rule of spain a long time ago. But after America won against spain in their war, philliphine was chaged under the rule of America. What date independence day in your country? I wrote herewith our dialogue. Please check grammer and expression I used. I really hope you can enjoy your time throughout this week. Bye.

Hi there! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in writing this one. Here are the corrections. Please be guided. take care and have a nice day! T. Kelly In addions, there is an official presidential ceremony to commemorate the historic moment. >> In addition, there is an official presidential ceremony to commemorate the historic moment.As well as the president, all of government leaders and representatives come together to pay Respect to those who fought for independence.>> All of the government officials, including the President, will gather together to pay respect to those who fought for independence.All citizens are encouraged to display the national flag. >> Correct It is an especially poignant day for those who recollect the war. >> Correct We feel national pride on this day that reminds us of the sacrifices our ancestors made.>> Correct I have knew the fact that your country were also under the rule of spain a long time ago.>> I have known the fact that your country was also under the rule of Spain a long time ago.But after America won against spain in their war, philliphine was chaged under the rule of America.>> But after the Americans won against the Spanish in the war, the Philippines was under the American rule. What date independence day in your country?>> What is the date of independence in your country? I wrote herewith our dialogue. Please check grammer and expression I used.>> I wrote our dialogue here. Please check the grammar and expressions I used. I really hope you can enjoy your time throughout this week. Bye. >> Correct