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Mcdonald\'s is very famous branch in the world, each branch has its own signature burgers. When I was in Australia, it was a happy thing to try a new burger that I haven\'t tried in Korea. There are several big different things between Korean and Australian Mcdonald\'s. First of all, the size of burgers are totally different, which means Australian is much bigger than Korean. Actually, before I went to Australia, I didn\'t notice that Korean Mcdonald\'s is small, but I found it in Australia. Second, there is a small difference in customer service. In Korea, after we have a meal in Mcdonald\'s, it is common to clean up the table and rest of them. But in Australia, I was surprised by their service, because after I had a meal, one of staff came to my table and clean up everything. It was so convenient and became one of reasons that I used to go there. Anyway, these are my comment for Mcdonald\'s in Korea and Australia.
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1. Mcdonald\'s is very famous branch in the world, each branch has its own signature burgers.
>>McDonald\'s is a very famous fast food restaurant in the world, each branch has its own signature burgers.
2. When I was in Australia, it was a happy thing to try a new burger that I haven\'t tried in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>When I was in Australia, it was exciting to try a new burger that I haven\'t tried in Korea.
3. There are several big different things between Korean and Australian Mcdonald\'s.
>>There are several big different things between Korean and Australian McDonald\'s.
4. First of all, the size of burgers are totally different, which means Australian is much bigger than Korean.
>>First of all, the size of the burgers are totally different, which means Australian is much bigger than Korean\'s.
5. Actually, before I went to Australia, I didn\'t notice that Korean Mcdonald\'s is small, but I found it in Australia.
>>Actually, before I went to Australia, I didn\'t notice that Korean McDonald\'s is small, but I noticed it when I was in Australia.
6. Second, there is a small difference in customer service.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Second, there is a slight difference in customer service.
7. In Korea, after we have a meal in Mcdonald\'s, it is common to clean up the table and rest of them.
>>In Korea, after we have a meal in McDonald\'s, it is common to clean up the table and the rest of it.
8. But in Australia, I was surprised by their service, because after I had a meal, one of staff came to my table and clean up everything.
>>But in Australia, I was surprised by their service, because after I had a meal, one of the staff came to my table and cleaned up everything.
9. It was so convenient and became one of reasons that I used to go there.
>>It was so convenient and it became one of reasons that I used to go there.
10. Anyway, these are my comment for Mcdonald\'s in Korea and Australia.
>>Anyway, these are my comments for McDonald\'s in Korea and in Australia.
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