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Hello [이름]! Thank you for the effort of writing and sending this in. It was a good way to get to know you more a bit. I think practice and exposure to the English language are the key factors to help someone develop their English fluency. Keep it up! 

- T. Beth

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I\'m on a business trip in a local town.

>>>> CORRECT.    
It is almost takes about 4 hours by car.
>>>> It takes almost about 4 hours by car.    

I\'m waiting for KTX train in order to go back to my house in Today.
>>>> I\'m waiting for the KTX train in order to go back home today.     

My major was electronic control in universty That\'s why now company is semiconductor maker.
>>>> I majored in electronic control in the University that\'s why I am now working in a company that makes semiconductor.     

I haven been working in this company for 10 years.
>>>> CORRECT.    

Some people has asked to me why is English fluency for you? 

>>>> Some people have asked me why English fluency is necessary for me.  

Because of my company is a foreign company.
>>>> It\'s because my company is a foreign company.

>>>> OR: It\'s because I work in a foreign company.     

I had to make smoe document by Englist, while I got phone call from head office it was very difficult to explain current status to them.
>>>>  I had to make some document in English. When receiving phone calls from the head office, it was very difficult to explain the current status to them.     

My boss has asked me if you want to promote to be manager you have to speak english more.
>>>> My boss has told me that if I wanted to be promoted to a manager I need to speak English better.    

I have to presentation in front of staffs When visited from head office empoley, so I really need to fluency Endlish.

>>>> I have to give presentations in front of staffs when an employee from the head company visits. So I really need to be fluent in English.