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Hi there [이름]~! Thanks for always studying hard! Keep it up!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

1. How late I fall a sleep, I always wake up early, which makes me feel tired whole day.

>>> How late I fall asleep. I always wake up early, which makes me feel tired the whole day.
 2. I was supposed to decorate the dispaly stands and change price labeltag for that event a day before it.

>>> I was supposed to decorate the display stands and change the price label tag a day before the event.
3. We regulary have temporary sale promotion event for 3 days on the end of every month.

>>> We regularly have temporary sale promotion event for 3 days every end of the month.
4. The ealier starting English, the faster we can absorb it.

>>> The earlier to start studying English, the faster we can absorb it.
5. We should try keeping the language we have studied as possible as we can after our ability of language became better than before.

>>> We should try to keep the language we have studied as possible as we can after our  language skills became better than before.
6. When I felt my English is not improving, I lost my motivation.

>>> CORRECT
7. I dusted and washed my bedclothes in the morning.

>>> 7. I dusted and washed my bed sheet in the morning.
8. It was memorable experience to me.

>>> It was a memorable experience to me.
9. Lately I and my daddy have started online grocery shopping since there have been only two of us at home.

>>> Lately I and my daddy have started online grocery shopping since there have been only the two of us at home.
10. It defenitely help you with study.

>>> It will definitely help you with your studies.
 11.
(1) It is very different for people who know local language and do not know it to travel that country. 

>>> It is very different from the people who know their local language and for the foreigners.

(2) Knowing local language makes huge difference to traveler.

>>> Knowing one\'s place local language makes huge difference to a traveler.