reward

2025-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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From a foreign perspective, maybe the most rewarding is learning on the spot. When they decide to studying abroad they want to study more advanced and better country than their country. To live as a foreign in other country is difficult emotionally and culturally. So studying abroad itself is a big challenge for our life. I recommend young generations that they try to challenge new and unfamiliar experiences without fear

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [이름]!
It is a very good recommendation and studying abroad boosts the confidence of many people, and they also change their perspective about other people.
Enjoy the weekend!
Aki~


From a foreign perspective, maybe the most rewarding is learning on the spot.
>>> From a foreign student\'s perspective, maybe the most rewarding is learning on the spot.

When they decide to studying abroad they want to study more advanced and better country than their country.
>>> When they decide to study abroad, they want to study more advanced and better country than their country.

To live as a foreign in other country is difficult emotionally and culturally.
>>>  To live as a foreigner in another country is difficult emotionally and culturally.

So studying abroad itself is a big challenge for our life.
>>> So studying abroad itself is a big challenge in our lives.

I recommend young generations that they try to challenge new and unfamiliar experiences without fear.
>>> I recommend that young generations try to challenge new and unfamiliar experiences without fear.

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