rice
학생이 쓴 원문
It is a nature phenominon that rice production decrease.
This is a result of policy.
The government policy is oriented toward expanding of industral facory area rather than agriculturl area.
I don\'t understand why they pretend to worry about this phenomenon
The young gengration does not prefer rice cook. They prefer bread and fusion food.
Rice consumption is decreasing and the popution is also decreasing.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
It saddens me to know that the government is involved in the decrease of rice production. Instead, os supporting farmers and locals to produce more produce, they focus on industrialization. Well, the tax is bigger than agriculture.
Talk to you later.
Aki~
It is a nature phenominon that rice production decrease.
>>> It is a natural phenomenon that rice production decreases.
This is a result of policy.
>>> CORRECT!
The government policy is oriented toward expanding of industral facory area rather than agriculturl area.
>>> The government\'s policy aims to expand industrial areas rather than agricultural ones.
I don\'t understand why they pretend to worry about this phenomenon
>>> CORRECT!
The young gengration does not prefer rice cook. They prefer bread and fusion food.
>>> The young generation does not prefer rice cooking. They prefer bread and fusion food.
Rice consumption is decreasing and the popution is also decreasing.
>>> The consumption of rice is decreasing, and the population is also decreasing.
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