rich
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This area is surrounging in the view of Seoul.
They are not real rich.
I think this phochological problems related to the of Koreans.
If they have a chance, they also want to ignore or divide the poor such as they were taken distinguished by the rich before.
The ways of sudden wealth are very limited.
Buying a house and rising house prices. It is a kind of speculation.
When we buy an old apartment and rebuild it by government anf a construction company. so the price of the house goes up.
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Happy Friday Ms. [이름]! I sometimes do not understand why do people have to live that way, But did you know that it happens to everyone? Have a nice weekend.
Aki
This area is surrounging in the view of Seoul.
>>> This area is surrounded by the view of Seoul.
They are not real rich.
>>> They are not really rich people.
I think this phochological problems related to the of Koreans.
>>> I think this psychological problem is related to Koreans.
If they have a chance, they also want to ignore or divide the poor such as they were taken distinguished by the rich before.
>>> If they have a chance, they want the poor people to experience how the rich ignored them before.
The ways of sudden wealth are very limited.
>>> CORRECT
OR >> The life of people who experienced sudden wealth does not last.
Buying a house and rising house prices. It is a kind of speculation.
>>> Buying a house and raising their prices in the future, is just a kind of speculation
When we buy an old apartment and rebuild it by government and a construction company. so the price of the house goes up.
>>> When we buy an old apartment and rebuild it by the government and a construction company. so the price of the house goes up.
>>>The price goes up when we buy an old apartment and it will be rebuild by the government and a construction company.
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