Riding the elevator
학생이 쓴 원문
1.In paragraph one what helps the reader know that an elevator ride can be like mountain climbing?
Because she\'s mom\'s friend works on a 44 story building.
2.The main character grabs the rail on the elevator because…?
because their eleveter is fast.
3.When everybody else gets off, the elevator speeds up. Why?
because they was stopping at the building 10
4.How did the main character and his/her mother get downtown?
They rided the texi.
5.Why does the mother smile at the main character in paragraph three?
because she did a right thing.
6.What word in paragraph four means the opposite of exciting?
nodded is the opposite of exiting.
7.What words in paragraph five let the reader know what an “observation deck” is?
When we were so high we visited the observation deck.
8.What is paragraph four mainly about?
It is mainly about lunch.
강사 첨삭
1.In paragraph one what helps the reader know that an elevator ride can be like mountain climbing?
Because she\'s mom\'s friend works on a 44 story building.
Because she\'s mom\'s friend works on a 44 story building.
>>> It went up almost a mile high.
2.The main character grabs the rail on the elevator because…?
because their eleveter is fast.
2.The main character grabs the rail on the elevator because…?
because their eleveter is fast.
>>> Because the elevator was moving fast.
3.When everybody else gets off, the elevator speeds up. Why?
because they was stopping at the building 10
3.When everybody else gets off, the elevator speeds up. Why?
because they was stopping at the building 10
>>> Because it was going higher to the 44th floor with no stops.
4.How did the main character and his/her mother get downtown?
They rided the texi.
4.How did the main character and his/her mother get downtown?
They rided the texi.
>>> They rode a taxi.
5.Why does the mother smile at the main character in paragraph three?
because she did a right thing.
5.Why does the mother smile at the main character in paragraph three?
because she did a right thing.
>>> She wanted to make her feel assured and not to be scared.
6.What word in paragraph four means the opposite of exciting?
nodded is the opposite of exiting.
6.What word in paragraph four means the opposite of exciting?
nodded is the opposite of exiting.
>>> Slowed (slow) is the opposite of exciting.
7.What words in paragraph five let the reader know what an “observation deck” is?
When we were so high we visited the observation deck.
7.What words in paragraph five let the reader know what an “observation deck” is?
When we were so high we visited the observation deck.
>>> You can see a great view, like you could see all the way to the next state.
8.What is paragraph four mainly about?
It is mainly about lunch.
8.What is paragraph four mainly about?
It is mainly about lunch.
>>> It\'s about how the character felt riding an elevator way up to a very high floor.
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