rights of robot
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Someday the robot complain their welfare and require their rights different human.
That means that the robot is not simple machine to be fallowing human orders.
If robots have self-consciousness, they are new type of entity.
Each countries are investing to develop of AI.
Their purpose is not keeping the world peace but occupying of supremacy in the world.
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Happy Tuesday, Ms. [이름]!
I totally agree with you. Scientists should put limitations on robots in order for them not be superior to humans. All the things we see in movies and read from books may happen if these invenotrs would not considered putting a \"weak\" point for their inventions.
Aki~
Someday the robot complain their welfare and require their rights different human.
>>> Someday robos will complain about their welfare and require their rights to be different from human.
That means that the robot is not simple machine to be fallowing human orders.
>>> That means that the robot is not a simple machine to follow human orders.
If robots have self-consciousness, they are new type of entity.
>>> If robots have self-consciousness, they are a new type of entity
Each countries are investing to develop of AI.
>>> CORRECT!
Their purpose is not keeping the world peace but occupying of supremacy in the world.
>>> Their purpose is not to keep the world peace but occupying of supremacy in the world.
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