ripley syndrome2

2017-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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People with Ripley syndrome have the following characteristics: First, it appears a lot in lonely and disadvantaged people. And he wants to be interested. People who have experienced isolated situations such as bullying, . The reason why this antisocial personality disorder is a problem is that it can lead to big crime such as theft fraud murder. Even if I lie, I think that I am not a liar, but a misunderstanding caused by the misperception of others. I do not recognize myself as a lie, so I do not have enough awareness of my illness. For example, a person who had been bullied falsified his education because he wanted to be recognized by others. Then he realized that he was a great person, and he lied to him with increasing scale.

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People with Ripley syndrome have the following characteristics: First, it appears a lot in lonely and disadvantaged people. And he wants to be interested.

>> People with Ripley syndrome have the following characteristics: First, it appears a lot to lonely and disadvantaged people because they want to be involved.

People who have experienced isolated situations such as bullying, .

>>People who have experienced isolated situations such as bullying.

The reason why this antisocial personality disorder is a problem is that it can lead to big crime such as theft fraud murder.

>>The reason why this antisocial personality disorder is a big problem is that it can lead to crime such as theft, fraud and murder.

Even if I lie, I think that I am not a liar, but a misunderstanding caused by the misperception of others.

>> Even if I lied, I know I am not a liar because that is only a result of misunderstanding caused by the misperception of others.

I do not recognize myself as a lie, so I do not have enough awareness of my illness.

>> I do not recognize myself as a liar so I do not have enough awareness about my illness.

For example, a person who had been bullied falsified his education because he wanted to be recognized by others.

>> For example, a person who had been bullied falsified his educational attainment because he wanted to be recognized by others.

Then he realized that he was a great person, and he lied to him with increasing scale.

>> Then he realized that he is a great person but he lied about himself by increasing his level.

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