ripley syndrome2
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People with Ripley syndrome have the following characteristics: First, it appears a lot in lonely and disadvantaged people. And he wants to be interested.
>> People with Ripley syndrome have the following characteristics: First, it appears a lot to lonely and disadvantaged people because they want to be involved.
People who have experienced isolated situations such as bullying, .
>>People who have experienced isolated situations such as bullying.
The reason why this antisocial personality disorder is a problem is that it can lead to big crime such as theft fraud murder.
>>The reason why this antisocial personality disorder is a big problem is that it can lead to crime such as theft, fraud and murder.
Even if I lie, I think that I am not a liar, but a misunderstanding caused by the misperception of others.
>> Even if I lied, I know I am not a liar because that is only a result of misunderstanding caused by the misperception of others.
I do not recognize myself as a lie, so I do not have enough awareness of my illness.
>> I do not recognize myself as a liar so I do not have enough awareness about my illness.
For example, a person who had been bullied falsified his education because he wanted to be recognized by others.
>> For example, a person who had been bullied falsified his educational attainment because he wanted to be recognized by others.
Then he realized that he was a great person, and he lied to him with increasing scale.
>> Then he realized that he is a great person but he lied about himself by increasing his level.
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