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Another example was that a high school student in a US high school in 2015 had heard news of success from Stanford and Harvard University at the same time.

>> DID YOU MEAN: Another example was when a US/ an American high school student had heard the news about the success of Stanford and Harvard University at the same time year 2015. 

The two universities have been in the issue after a two-year visit, and then they have been offered a superb suggestion that they can choose and graduate from one place.

>> DID YOU MEAN: The two universities have studied the issue after a two-year visit, and then they have been offered a superb suggestion that they can choose and graduate from another place.

 I remember seeing this news as a great person.

>> CORRECT

However, it is said that it was a lie.

>> However, it was said to be a lie.

This has turned out and many people have become interested in Ripley syndrome.

>> This has turned out and many people became interested in Ripley\'s Syndrome.