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Prepare for My Interview.. Q>> Why do you think we should hire you..?? My A>> I can speak two languages. Korean and English. I will (go on??) study English go on more than now very well. I always like to be go to travel. I have many traveling experiences so, I can give possible many information for abroad go to people. And I am very interest make a travel plan. I'd like to share everythings for about traveling with many people. I believe that I am the best person for the job.

Hello [이름], I just saw your composition, thanks for writing. I hope my corrections will help you with your job interview. Take care and talk to you later. T. RJ Here are your corrections: Q>> Why do you think we should hire you..??My A>> I can speak two languages. Korean and English.>>CORRECTI will (go on??) study English go on more than now very well.>>I am improving with my English study.I always like to be go to travel.>>I always like to travel.I have many traveling experiences so, I can give possible many information for abroad go to people.>>I have many traveling experiences so I can give much information for people who want to go abroad.And I am very interest make a travel plan.>>And I am very interested in making a travel plan.I'd like to share everythings for about traveling with many people.>>I'd like to share everything about traveling with many other people.I believe that I am the best person for the job. >>CORRECT