Robot can replace human work?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think robot can replace human work.
Today\'s technology upgrade itself, and many jobs are replaced in now.
For example, my town\'s restaurant has a serving robot which can serve food.
And there is an android which talks with people as if It is a real human.
SO, I think robot takes humans job and makes the world better to live.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I totally agree with you. I think robots will do most human jobs in the future. It\'s a little scary to be honest. Thank you for expressing your thoughts in an organized way in this writing. Keep up the great job!
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Today\'s technology upgrade itself, and many jobs are replaced in now.
Today\'s technology upgrade itself, and many jobs are replaced in now.
>>Today\'s technology upgrades itself, and many jobs are replaced now.
For example, my town\'s restaurant has a serving robot which can serve food.
For example, my town\'s restaurant has a serving robot which can serve food.
>>CORRECT!
And there is an android which talks with people as if It is a real human.
And there is an android which talks with people as if It is a real human.
>>CORRECT!
SO, I think robot takes humans job and makes the world better to live.
SO, I think robot takes humans job and makes the world better to live.
>>So, I think robots will take over humans job and will make the world a better place to live in.
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