robot industry in Korea.
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Today, I would like talk about robot industry in Korea.
>> Today, I would like talk about the robot industry in Korea.
According to the article Korea will have robots than any other country by next year.
>> According to the article Korea will have more robots than any other country by next year.
We can see robots that are replacing human part easily.
>> We can see robots that are replacing human\'s work easily.
For example, the cleaning robot has become popular present for the house warming part.
>> For example, the cleaning robot has becoming a popular present for the house warming party.
Busy people in modern society use robots to clean their floors and to wash the laundry and dishes.
>> Busy people in the modern society use robots to clean their floors and wash the laundry and the dishes.
These things make human to have more spare time that man can work.
>> These things make human to have more spare time so that man can work.
Through this human have more chance to focus on developing something for the progress of human being.
>> Through this humans can have more chances to focus on developing something for the progress of human being.
According to research firm Spire research, Korea is expected to have over 2 million robots, including industrial and non industrial ones, by next year.
>> According to a research firm Spire research, Korea is expected to have over 2 million robots, including industrial and non industrial ones, by next year.
And the robotics industry already have doubled last year from five year ago.
>> And the robotics industry already have doubled for the past five years.
The government plans to invest about 7 trillion won to promote the industry.
>> correct!
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