Rock and roll!!
학생이 쓴 원문
The greatest rock and roll star I know is John Lennon. It may not be authentic rock, but anyone who dreams of rock and roll will listen to his songs. The members of Oasis also respect him and want to be like him.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The greatest rock and roll star I know is John Lennon.
>>> CORRECT!
It may not be authentic rock, but anyone who dreams of rock and roll will listen to his songs.
>>> CORRECT!
The members of Oasis also respect him and want to be like him.
>>> CORRECT!
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