Rocks
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Are there any legend, folktale, or story you know about rocks? Write about one.
*This is a real story.*
Long time ago, people liked son more then daughter.
So married women does a costom like this;
1. They eat a powder of stone Buddha statue\'s nose.
2. They wear a inerwear that the woman that have son wore.
...etc.
강사 첨삭
Hi Clair!
The custom you mentioned is an interesting one. Thanks for sending your homework.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Are there any legend, folktale, or story you know about rocks? Write about one.
*This is a real story.*
Long time ago, people liked son more then daughter.
>> A long time ago, people liked sons more than daughters. [Note the spelling of the word \'than\'.]
So married women does a costom like this;
>> So married women had a custom like this: [Note the spelling of the word \'custom\'.]
1. They eat a powder of stone Buddha statue\'s nose.
>> They ate a powder of a stone Buddha statue\'s nose.
2. They wear a inerwear that the woman that have son wore.
...etc.
>> They wore the innerwear that the woman that had a son wore, etc.[Note the spelling of the word \'innerwear\'.]
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