role of goverment in regulating the employment
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first of all, I think that national economic system have to chang like developed countries.
>> First of all, I think our national economic system have to change just like in developed countries.
Developement of Industry inthe world is too fast to catch up with it
so goverment try to find the problem that all of company enforce contempory industrial structure.
>> Industrial development of the world is too fast. To catch up with it, the goverment is trying to find the problem that is why all companies enforce contempory industrial structure.
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