Role of mother is..
학생이 쓴 원문
When my sons were elementary school.
I thought mother has to prepare the meal with sincerity and supported their education.
But I missed that parents have to praise their children.
People who was praised from mother.
They could be confident and strong.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
I appreciate you for telling me some things that are not even in our books. Thank you for doing that :) May you always practice your speaking and writing skills. Have a great day!
Aki~
When my sons were elementary school.
>>> When my sons were in elementary school.
I thought mother has to prepare the meal with sincerity and supported their education.
>>> I thought the mother has to prepare the meal with sincerity and support their education.
But I missed that parents have to praise their children.
>>> CORRECT!
People who was praised from mother.
>>> People who were praised by their mother.
They could be confident and strong.
>>> CORRECT!
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