Rollplay cancle appointment
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1. Hi, Min~. It\\\'s me. [이름]. How is it going?
well, I was wondering if you wanted to go hiking with me tommow.
It\\\'s ok? So, what time are you available? Is 10AM OK with you? Perfect.
And where should we meek ? At the main gate of the park? Okay. No problem.
Do you have any plans after hiking? That sounds great!
OK, see you tommorow then, Bye.
2. cancle appointment
Hi there, this is [이름].
I\\\'m so sorry. I have to cancel our appointment today. I am so sick now. I went for a walk with the kids last night and sprained my ankle. The ligament is torn. Doctor said that the ligament was torn and I had to put on a cast for 3 weeks.
How about coming to over my home instead?
Or how about you next time?
I think it will be okay next month . OK. Bye.
3.I had a very similar experience before. I planed to meet with my younger sister. But that morning, my son\'s thumb was stuck in the hinge of the door. Unfortunately the thumb nails fell out. hospital in a hurry.
강사 첨삭
You did an awesome job [이름]! Please keep in mind all the corrections I made below. ^^
-Teacher Elise
>> Hi, Min! It\'s me, [이름]. How is it going?
well, I was wondering if you wanted to go hiking with me tommow.
>> Well, I was wondering if you wanted to go hiking with me tomorrow.
(BE CAREFUL WHEN IT COMES TO THE SPELLING AND USAGE OF THE PUNCTUATION MARKS)
It\\\'s ok? So, what time are you available? Is 10AM OK with you? Perfect.
>> Are you interested? That\'s great! So, what time are you available? Is 10:00 am okay with you? Perfect!
(BE CAREFUL WHEN IT COMES TO THE SPELLING AND USAGE OF THE PUNCTUATION MARKS)
And where should we meek ? At the main gate of the park? Okay. No problem.
>> By the way, where should we meet? At the main gate of the park? Okay. No problem.
Do you have any plans after hiking? That sounds great!
>> CORRECT
OK, see you tommorow then, Bye.
>> Okay, see you tomorrow then. Bye!
(BE CAREFUL WHEN IT COMES TO THE SPELLING)
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Hi there, this is [이름].
>> Hi there, this is [이름].
I\\\'m so sorry. I have to cancel our appointment today.
>> I\'m so sorry but I have to cancel our appointment today.
I am so sick now.
>> CORRECT
I went for a walk with the kids last night and sprained my ankle.
>> CORRECT
he ligament is torn.
>> My ligament is torn.
Doctor said that the ligament was torn and I had to put on a cast for 3 weeks.
>> CORRECT
How about coming to over my home instead?
>>How about coming over to my home instead?
Or how about you next time?
>> Oh that\'s unfortunate, how about next time?
I think it will be okay next month . OK. Bye.
>> CORRECT
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I had a very similar experience before.
>>CORRECT
I planed to meet with my younger sister.
>> I planned to meet with my younger sister.
But that morning, my son\'s thumb was stuck in the hinge of the door.
>> CORRECT
Unfortunately the thumb nails fell out. hospital in a hurry.
>> Unfortunately, the nail on his thumb fell out and we needed to take him to the hospital.
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