Roses

You know, roses are very pretty. And very red. But the first rose was not red or white. It's was green. And it's was very expensive. The green roses was not pretty. Infact it was ugly. It was first discovered at rome. That why it is called a rose. At first the roses used like bandages. And then it was use like perfumes. Then one day a storm came. All the pepole the roses will die. But it didn't. Infact it looked very pretty.

Hello there, Ji[이름]! This is a pretty good story. I didn\'t know anything about the origin of the rose. Did you read this somewhere? Thanks for sharing this. Good job! Please review my corrections below. Take note of the verb tenses and proper spacing. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ You know, roses are very pretty. >> CORRECT!And very red. >> CORRECT! But the first rose was not red or white. >> CORRECT! It\'s was green. >> It was green.And it\'s was very expensive. >> And it was very expensive.The green roses was not pretty. >> The green roses were not pretty.Infact it was ugly. >> In fact, they were ugly. It was first discovered at rome. >> It was first discovered in Rome. That why it is called a rose. >> That\'s why it is called a \"rose\".At first the roses used like bandages. >> At first, roses were used as bandages.And then it was use like perfumes. >> And then they were used as a perfume.Then one day a storm came. >> Then, one day, a storm came.All the pepole the roses will die. >> Everyone thought the roses will die. But it didn\'t. >> CORRECT! Infact it looked very pretty. >> They still looked very pretty.