Rowena!

2012-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi, I'm Yu-mi. today is year end party of my company. So I won't call with you. Yesterday I didn't tell you. Sorry! I like to talking you. kk I have a question. How many times do you calling in a day? Anyway, Rowena! always take care. And happy New year! See you next year. Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hey there. I hope you had a wonderful day.

About your company\'s year end party, it\'s okay.

I understand. I will miss you though!

Regarding your question, we only call you on the appointed class schedule.

I guess, you better call our managers in case you want to be called twice, or whatever you like.

Anyway, I made some corrections below.

Please go over them and continue to practice.

We don\'t have class on Monday and Tuesday,so I guess I\'ll see you on Wednesday then.

Enjoy the party! I wish I can come too!(Just Kidding)

Take Care always!

_Teacher Rowena

Hi, I\'m Yu-mi.

>>Correct
today is year end party of my company.

>>Today is the year-end party of my company.

So I won\'t call with you.

>>I won\'t be able to have a class with you.
Yesterday I didn\'t tell you. Sorry!

>>I\'m sorry I wasn\'t able to tell you yesterday.

I like to talking you. kk

>>I like talking to you.

I have a question.

>>Correct

How many times do you calling in a day?
>>How many times do you make a call in a day?
Anyway, Rowena! always take care. And happy New year!
>>Anyway, Rowena always take care and I wish you a happy New year!
See you next year. Bye!

>>Correct

 

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