Rude attitude
학생이 쓴 원문
In conclusion, it is very rude to intervene and interrupt the conversation.
It is very important to listen in relationships and conversations.
Therefore, I will be very angry if there is anyone who doesn\'t listen to me and interrupts into the middle of the conversation.
Because such a behavior is like ignoring me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
We actually have the same opinion in this situation.
I could relate to what you wrote.
The sentence format you chose is really clear.
Keep writing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In conclusion, it is very rude to intervene and interrupt the conversation.
>> In conclusion, it is very rude to intervene and interrupt a conversation.
It is very important to listen in relationships and conversations.
It is very important to listen in relationships and conversations.
>> Correct
Therefore, I will be very angry if there is anyone who doesn\'t listen to me and interrupts into the middle of the conversation.
Therefore, I will be very angry if there is anyone who doesn\'t listen to me and interrupts into the middle of the conversation.
>> Therefore, I will be very angry if there is anyone who doesn\'t listen to me and interrupts in the middle of a conversation.
Because such a behavior is like ignoring me.
Because such a behavior is like ignoring me.
>> This is because such a behavior makes me feel that someone is ignoring me.
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