Rules&Policies
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Theme: [ESSAY] If you could, how would you want to change the rules or policies at your school?
I would change the rule about school president.
In my school, students can become a nominee when they are in 5th or 6th grade.
So I want to change it like this:
All students(1st~6th grade)can become a nominee of school president!
I want to change the rule about school president!
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Here\'s your edited composition, Clair!
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On a different note, all the best on your election day. I\'ll always be one of your cheerleaders!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] If you could, how would you want to change the rules or policies at your school?
I would change the rule about school president.
>> I would change the rule about the selection of a school president.
In my school, students can become a nominee when they are in 5th or 6th grade.
>> In my school, a student can become a nominee when they are in 5th or 6th grade.
So I want to change it like this:
All students(1st~6th grade)can become a nominee of school president!
>> All students regardless of their grade level can become a school president nominee.
I want to change the rule about school president!
>> Therefore, I want to change the requirements for the school president.
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