Rural area.
학생이 쓴 원문
Rural area have many advantages. Typical example are clean nature and beautiful scenery.
But there are disadvantage. There are fewer hospitals and cultural facilities than cities.
강사 첨삭
You are right, Emily! I really love living in rural areas because of fresh air. Nice answer! See you!-Faith-
Rural area have many advantages. >> Rural areas have many advantages.
Typical example are clean nature and beautiful scenery.
>> The Typical examples are clean nature and beautiful scenery.
But there are disadvantage.
But there are disadvantage.
>> But, there are disadvantages, too.
There are fewer hospitals and cultural facilities than cities.
>> There are fewer hospitals and cultural facilities than in cities.
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