Ryu Hyun Jin

2022-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

Ryu hyun jin is influencer who influenced me the most. He is a famous baseballplayer. I learned many things about baseball by him.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Oh, I\'ve never heard of this person. This made me  curious. I will search for him more and watch more of his games. He sounds like a terrific guy. 

PS: I wish he could influence more people like you. :) 

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Ryu hyun jin is influencer who influenced me the most. 
>>  Ryu Hyun Jin is the celebrity who influenced me the most. 

He is a famous baseballplayer. 
>> He is a famous baseball player. 

I learned many things about baseball by him.
>> I learned many things about baseball because of him.

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