Ryu Hyun-Jin won the game.

I didn't like baseball much before I saw the game of today. having eaten lunch, I saw Ryu Hyun-Jin on TV. He is famous pitcher in korea, Known as perfect pitching. though his last team is the most weak team in Korean league, He always do his best in every game. latly, I heard about Ryu's trading news. He ended up going LA Dodgers. He pitched very well today. and He won the game by 3:0 he never gave a point to his opponents. I was exited eventhough I watch the part of game. I wanted him to be a famous baseball player in America too. 1.Karen is rich; however, her cousin Kate is poor. 2.You'd better take a taxi. otherwise, you'll arrive late. 3. enjoy reading this new magazine. moreover, it has good articles. 4.Jack wasn't tired. hence, he took a nap. 5.Phil was not thirsty; moreover, he drank five glasses of water.

Hi there [이름] ^-^ Wow! Long time no see! Thank you for sending me a composition tonight.^^ You did a good job! You had three correct answers. Keep up the good work! If you have any questions, just feel free to ask it in class. I heard his name from one of my students before. I think he will be famous in another country, because he is a great player. He never gives up. ^^ Thank you for your story! See you! Take Care! Sweet dreams! Good night! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: I didn\'t like baseball much before I saw the game of today. >> I didn\'t like baseball much until I saw the game today.having eaten lunch, I saw Ryu Hyun-Jin on TV. >> When I was eating lunch, I saw Ryu Hyun-Jin on TV. He is famous pitcher in korea, Known as perfect pitching. >> He is a famous pitcher in Korea and he was known because he has a perfect pitch,though his last team is the most weak team in Korean league, >> Although his team was the weakest in Korean league.He always do his best in every game. >> He always do his best in every game.latly, I heard about Ryu\'s trading news. >> Lately, I heard about Ryu\'s trading news.He ended up going LA Dodgers. >> He ended up being a part of the team LA Dodgers. He pitched very well today. >> Correctand He won the game by 3:0 he never gave a point to his opponents. >> He won the game with the score of 3:0 and he never gave a point to his opponents.I was exited eventhough I watch the part of game. >> I was excited even though I already watched a part of the game.I wanted him to be a famous baseball player in America too.>> I want him to be a famous baseball player in America too.1.Karen is rich; however, her cousin Kate is poor. >> Correct!2.You\'d better take a taxi. otherwise, you\'ll arrive late. >> Correct!3. enjoy reading this new magazine. moreover, it has good articles. >> Correct!4.Jack wasn\'t tired. hence, he took a nap. >> neverheless 5.Phil was not thirsty; moreover, he drank five glasses of water. >> however