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These days,I raises two pets.
These are fish and a craw.
They are very different.
Fish-I have a 12 fish.
But one of my fish is die.
And now I have a 11 fish.
And they are small maybe 2cm.
But they are veyr beautiful.
Craw-I have a just one craw.
It is very strong.
And it is long and big about 9 or 10cm.
I like pets and i love it.
SO i wanted a dog,cat and some other pets.
Anyway,i love my pets very much sometimes i forget their food.
I sorry my pets!!!!!!!!!!
How about you teacher?
강사 첨삭
Hi Justin! Thanks for writing a composition today. Sorry to hear about your dead fish. At least you still have 11 of them. ^^ I don\'t like taking care of pets because I\'m too busy. I don\'t like cleaning after them or feeding them too. Haha. I guess I\'m not fit to be a pet owner. Have a wonderful weekend! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
These days,I raises two pets.
>> These days I\'m raising two pets.These are fish and a craw.
>> I\'m raising a fish and a crow.They are very different.>> CORRECTFish-I have a 12 fish.
>> I have 12 fish.But one of my fish is die.
>> But one of my fish died.And now I have a 11 fish.
>> Now I only have 11 fish.And they are small maybe 2cm.
>> They are still small, maybe around 2 cm.But they are veyr beautiful.
>> CORRECT
*veryCraw-I have a just one craw.
>> I only have one crow.It is very strong.
>> CORRECTAnd it is long and big about 9 or 10cm.
>> CORRECT
OR >> It is long and big, about 9 or 10 cm.I like pets and i love it.
>> I like pets.
OR >> I love pets.SO i wanted a dog,cat and some other pets.
>> So I want to have other pets like cats and dogs.Anyway,i love my pets very much sometimes i forget their food.
>> Anyway, I love my pets very much but sometimes I forget to give them food.I sorry my pets!!!!!!!!!!
>> I feel sorry to my pets.How about you teacher?
>> CORRECT
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