Sad
학생이 쓴 원문
I am sad to read the result this poll.
Why do so many Koreans think like this?
Since when do we regard as meaningful life material well-being than human?
Originally Korea was a Confucian country and respect spiritual values.
The governments and society aiways have pursued to industrial growth , market captalism and competition.
We don\'t have on spiritual leader in society.
Money and power are only the supreme leaders.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
I am sad to read the result this poll.
>>> I am sad to read the result of this poll.
Why do so many Koreans think like this?
Why do so many Koreans think like this?
>>> Why do so many Koreans think this way?
Since when do we regard as meaningful life material well-being than human?
Since when do we regard as meaningful life material well-being than human?
>>> Since when did we regard material well-being more meaningful than human?
Originally Korea was a Confucian country and respect spiritual values.
Originally Korea was a Confucian country and respect spiritual values.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Originally, Korea has a high respect on spiritual values because it was Confucian country.
The governments and society aiways have pursued to industrial growth , market captalism and competition.
The governments and society aiways have pursued to industrial growth , market captalism and competition.
>>> The government and society ave always pursued to industrial growth, market capitalism and competition.
We don\'t have on spiritual leader in society
We don\'t have on spiritual leader in society
>>> We don\'t have a spiritual leader in the society
Money and power are only the supreme leaders.
Money and power are only the supreme leaders.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Wealth and authority are its supremacy.
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