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학생이 쓴 원문
New teachers are in 20s who are the highest score group with the university exam.
They are very successful students in Korea society.
They have never experience of failure and compromise compare to other students.
The worst problem in now is excessive parental complaints thay only their child is right and precious.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
Changes in society have brought an impact even on how we treat other people. In the past, we have high regard for the teachers, we respect them and we know their authority. Nowadays, only very few people give value to the profession of teachers. We really need a reform!
Aki~
New teachers are in 20s who are the highest score group with the university exam.
>>> New teachers in their 20s who are the highest score group with the university exam.
They are very successful students in Korea society.
>>> They are very successful students in Korean society.
They have never experience of failure and compromise compare to other students.
>>> They have never experienced failure and compromise compare to other students.
The worst problem in now is excessive parental complaints thay only their child is right and precious.
>>> The worst problem now is excessive parental complaints that only their child is right and precious.
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