Sad Dependence on Oblivion

2022-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I can\'t remember myself overcoming my own failure. Not just because I am stupid, but because I forget my failure easily. Therefore, I can try again and again. At last , I overcome my failure which I don\'t know if I did. This looks nice, but this is truly cruel thing for me. I repeat my failure since I don\'t remember it. This means I don\'t know what I\'ve done and why I\'ve failed. Therefore, I can\'t learn from failure. It is quite sad way to handle this.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I can\'t remember myself overcoming my own failure.

>> CORRECT!
Not just because I am stupid, but because I forget my failure easily.

>>  CORRECT!
Therefore, I can try again and again.

>> CORRECT!
At last , I overcome my failure which I don\'t know if I did.

>> Eventually, I overcome my failure which I\'m not sure I made.
This looks nice, but this is truly cruel thing for me.

>> This sounds nice, but this is truly a cruel thing for me.
I repeat my failure since I don\'t remember it. 

>> I tend to repeat my failure since I don\'t remember it.

This means I don\'t know what I\'ve done and why I\'ve failed. 

>> CORRECT!

Therefore, I can\'t learn from failure.

>> CORRECT!
It is quite sad way to handle this.

>> It is quite a sad way to handle this.

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