Sad music
학생이 쓴 원문
I tend to listen to sad music when I feel down. Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger, but I think it actually helps me relieve stress. The messages of these songs are usually sad like breakups
강사 첨삭
Hi, Racheal! Sad music oftentimes appeal to our emotions, and it\'s actually healthy to have an outlet to express what we feel. Music is a great form of expression. Let\'s enjoy music!
--Teacher Anji
I tend to listen to sad music when I feel down.
>> CORRECT
Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger, but I think it actually helps me relieve stress.
>> Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger and I think it actually helps me relieve stress.
The messages of these songs are usually sad like breakups.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger, but I think it actually helps me relieve stress.
>> Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger and I think it actually helps me relieve stress.
The messages of these songs are usually sad like breakups.
>> CORRECT
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