sad news

Hi teacher Cam~ How are you? How was your Seol holiday? I had a good time with my family. But I had a sad thing. Seol holiday before, my boss's son died. He was only 28 years old. I dont'know exactly why he died. People said that's cause a heart attact. I was shocked to hear that news. Last Friday, I attended the funeral. His body which was cremated was buried tomb. I couldn't hardly cry. Many People mourned over the death of him. So I couldn't attend my class last Thursday and Friday. My boss didn't come to work today. She was fallen deep sad. There's nothing to do for her. Just I pray for them. I'll cheer up and I will live hard.

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for dropping in your composition. I\'m so sorry for what happened to your boss\'s son. Life is so sjort so we have to live life to the fullest! Anyway, I made some modifications on your composition Miss. [Name], just study the following: Talk to you later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam Hi teacher Cam~How are you? How was your Seol holiday? >>How was your holiday? >>How was your Seolnal?I had a good time with my family. >>correct!But I had a sad thing. >>correct! >>But I have a bad news.Sol holiday before, my boss\'s son died. >>Before Seolnal, my boss\'s son died.He was only 28 years old. >>correct!I dont\'know exactly why he died. >>I don\'t know exactly why he died.People said that\'s cause a heart attact. >>People said it was due to heart attack.Last Friday, I attended the funeral. >>correct!His body which was cremated was buried tomb. >>His body which was cremated was laid in a tomb.I couldn\'t hardly cry. >>correct! Many People mourned over the death of him.>>Many people mourned over his death.So I couldn\'t attend my class last Thursday and Friday.>correct! >>That was the reason why I couldn\'t attedn our clss last Thursday and Friday.My boss didn\'t come to work today. >>correct!She was fallen deep sad. >>She was so depressed.There\'s nothing to do for her. >>correct! >>I couldn\'t do anything for her.Just I pray for them.>>correct!I\'ll cheer up and I will live hard. >>correct!