Sadness
학생이 쓴 원문
Does sadness play an important role in people\'s lives? I think sadness play an important role in people\'s lives. Because, after feeling sad, I can develop.
강사 첨삭
Hey Justine! it would be prefect if you won\'t start a sentence with a connector such as \"because\" since its\' main purpose is to connect one idea to another. Overall, this is a great sentence. T. Linda
I think sadness play an important role in people\'s lives. Because, after feeling sad, I can develop.
>> I think sadness plays an important role in people\'s lives because I can grow after feeling sad.
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