Sahara Desert
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I think that Sahara Desert is the biggest desert in the whole wide world. There is a camel and high sand hills. There is a not enough water in the desert so I don't like to go to desert because we will die out of thrist. And there is cactus which is very dangerous because it has sharp things at the end of it.
Do you want to go to the desert? What will you do?
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Sahara Desert is the largest hot desert and the third largest desert after Arctic and Antarctic. In a desert, there\'s what you call \'oasis\'. Oasis ia n isolated part of a desert typically surrounding a spring or similar water source so there\'s water that you can drink. But, due to how wide deserts are, you\'re surely lucky if you\'ll find the oasis.^_^
I don\'t want to go to a desert. I have poor or low tolerance for heat so I might not survive in there.:(
Thank you so much for this composition. I\'ve read it well.
~T. Mayleen~
I think that Sahara Desert is the biggest desert in the whole wide world.
>> Correct!
There is a camel and high sand hills.
>> There are camels and sand hills.
There is a not enough water in the desert so I don\'t like to go to desert because we will die out of thrist.
>> There is no water in the desert that\'s why I\'d never go there for I might die of thirst.
And there is cactus which is very dangerous because it has sharp things at the end of it.
>> And there are cacti with sharp thorns on their leaves.Do you want to go to the desert?
>> Correct!
What will you do?
>> What would you do?
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