Sales Person
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I would call the clients concerning the new developed products.
And then, I send the information of the new products to them by mail.
Afterward, I call again each client to confirm if they took well understanding
for the using method, quality, and efficiency of the products, etc.
After passing one week, I meet them to explain it with more detailed materials..
강사 첨삭
Hi there again [이름]!
Your explanation here is very good! The way you would make a client understand your product is very systematic and sincere.
Kindly go over the explanations I made below. If you have further questions, you may ask them in class when I see you next week.
Take care and have a very happy weekend!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
And then, I send the information of the new products to them by mail.
>> And then, I U send the information of the new products to them by mail.
EXPLANATION: Since you used \"would\" to express a hypothetical answer, then it must also be on this sentence to mean the same time frame.
Afterward, I call again each client to confirm if they took well understanding
for the using method, quality, and efficiency of the products, etc.
>> Afterward, I would call again each client to confirm if they had a good understanding
for the using method, quality, and efficiency of the products, etc.EXPLANATION: The expression \"had a good understanding\" is more appropriate. Otherwise, you can also say \"well-understood\".
After passing one week, I meet them to explain it with more detailed materials..
After passing one week, I meet them to explain it with more detailed materials..
>> After a week/ After a week passed, I would meet them to explain it with more detailed materials.
EXPLANATION: You may choose from the two suggestions of expressing time frame between \"After a week/ After a week passed...\" as these are the common ways to express after one week had gone by.
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