Sally!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I had a hard time TT
Because I try to write Cover letter in Enlish..
Please help me !!
I completed internship program in Aek[이름]g petrochemical Inc. and small corporation called [Company]. I learned how to analyze water and use instrument such as IC and GC in intership. Also I examined the process of the chemical plant. The training gave me a confidence of chemical engineering.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
That was a good composition...:)
Its nice to know that those trainings you had made you more confident regarding your job,
and Im also hoping that studying English would also build your confidence more..
Thank you and talk to you again tomorrow..
T.Sally
Today I had a hard time TT>>correct!
Because I try to write Cover letter in Enlish..
Because I try to write Cover letter in Enlish..
>>Because I tried writing a cover letter in English.
Please help me !!
>>correct!
I completed internship program in Aek[이름]g petrochemical Inc. and small corporation called [Company].
Please help me !!
>>correct!
I completed internship program in Aek[이름]g petrochemical Inc. and small corporation called [Company].
>>correct!
I learned how to analyze water and use instrument such as IC and GC in intership.
>>correct!
Also I examined the process of the chemical plant.
>>correct!
>>I also examined the process of the chemical plant.- better
The training gave me a confidence of chemical engineering.
>>The training gave me confidence regarding chemical engineering.
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